Personal Narrative - Crappy draft

I have to say that writing this way is somewhat liberating, mainly because I know that no one will be reading it. My story is about a houseboat trip my extended family took one summer when I was about five, and it is one of those stories that is always in my little anecdotal arsenal. But the last time I actually wrote about it I was in 2nd grade, so I sort of was channeling my inner 8 year old, which was quite fun. There have been a few golden nuggets that have found their way onto the page.